Sunday, February 10, 2008

Part Two


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Once Again.

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Most incidents in this story are from reality.
Alot of the info has been changed to withhold the character's identity
Any resemblance most likely would be a mere coincidence

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Part II (Do)


Abdullah’s father welcomed the news of his son’s matrimony with a heart attack that ended his life. Jassem had great plans for his son, none of which included marrying into a poor Saudi family. Abdullah’s marriage was supposed to be a business transaction and not one based from pre-martial relationships just like all his brother's and sister's marriages were before him. Abdullah’s mother, Su3ad couldn’t forgive her son, for marrying against her will and for being the cause of her husband’s death. All of Abdullah’s brothers and sisters did the same. They all chose not to speak to him and so Abdullah was shun from the family. Reem too was now alone, her own family had disowned her as soon as they heard that Abdullah had married their daughter against his father’s will. They asked her to get a divorce but when she refused they asked never to see her again.

Every day for next three years Reem begged Abdullah to go and ask for his mother’s forgiveness, but Abdullah’s pride and sense of guilt held him back. Even when Reem gave birth to Fay and then Dhay, none of his brothers or sisters called to congratulate him on either occasions. When Reem first gave birth to Fay, a year after their marriage, she secretly went to Su3ad’s house. She wanted Su3ad to see the baby that was named after her mother. Su3ad’s reaction was asking the security guards not to let Reem in. She claimed that she was an unwelcome beggar, and if she insisted to come in they were to call the police. Su3ad was never mentioned again, until that one day in June. Abdullah’s mother was admitted to Al-Blah hospital in Kuwait. Su3ad was diagnosed with Thryoid cancer. She had already reached the last stages of cancer and there was little hope for being cured. Abdullah begged for his mother’s forgiveness and his mother welcomed him with open arms. Su3ad too apologized that she had not taken the effort to try and welcome Reem into their family. Su3ad promised herself that she was going to try and make it up to Reem before her time in life was through. Abdullah was shocked to see that his mother wasn’t accompanied by any one of his brothers or sisters to the hospital. She was on her own other than being with the maid and driver. His mother explained that they all have been very busy with their own lives lately that she doesn’t even see them for weeks at a time. Like a typical mother she felt sorry for them and silently prayed that God would help them, when in reality she was the one in need for God’s help. Abdullah was furious, and left the hospital enraged by this piece of information. How could they! His mother was all alone and she needed to be taken care of. Maybe if one of them had taken her in for a check-up once in a while then maybe they could have caught the cancer in its early stages, saving his mothers life. On his way back home, a speeding Porsche passed a red light and crashed into Abdullah’s car. Abdullah was killed instantly in the accident.


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No this isnt the last part.. Taw elnaas..
This is all just an introductory if you may..
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29 comments:

Yara said...

laa laa laa eshlon eymoot 7araam :(

Anonymous said...

Ga3da et3athbeeeeeneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

shoosha said...

moo 3ajbatni il nehaya :P '3ayreeha plz! khalley e3eesh ;p
oo zain sawaitay bil paragraphs, as-hal to read :p i dont want to push it baas color coded bekoon a7san ba3ad :P

Bombay Bombshell said...

yara: This is the way it is b3ad shasawi ;p ..more to come ;p

hamitaf: Esmella 3alaich men elta3theeeeb ehehe ;p

shoosha: lol ;p Im so sorry ;p enshallah 7a'6reeen ;p

Amethyst said...

Laish chethi ela7dath saree3a?!

Bombay Bombshell said...
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Bombay Bombshell said...

Amethyst:Because, like I previously stated on my post, at the end if you didnt see it..these posts so far are just introductory ones :)

Ms. D said...

lesh gsera!! ow lesh mawatay elnass!!! theyr not supposed to die! just not yet!

Taqo said...

WTH! =/
No. :-S

FourMe said...

Bloody hell woman don't go off killing characters already n6ray shway !

Anonymous said...

Heart attack o cancer o car accident kela m3a ba3ath! 9akaitay 3la 3ers el dam ;p bas ham suspense. O still i like ur narrating wayed.

Hopeless Poet said...

Why? Why? Why did he has to die? :(
Yattamti Fay wo Dhay :(

falantan said...

headcount in this part alone is 3 people. mo3addal 1 kill/paragraph. safaa7a. bs yalla a7san ymotoon al7en gabl la aser too emotionally attached ba3dain shefekne. o Abdalla's death didn't sink in yet, my mouth is still in "o" shape.

falantan said...

btw, you might wish to fix your blog timezone. its under Settings->Formatting

Anonymous said...

7aram *broken heart* I need the part 3 please!!

Bombay Bombshell said...

ms.d: Because khalas el intro ! Now the real story begins ;p
taqo:yess!!
fourme: LOL ! ;p
soul: LOOL!!Law ba9eer nafs 3ers eldam chan sawait elyaddah lesbian oo feha allergies men women ! and thank you ;p
hopeless: Yeah :/ It's how they both live their lives fatherless!
falantan: LOOL !! Okay, I loved your comment :P and thanks for the timezone thing! Hugely appreciated !!
amu: *glues heart back together* Yallah I'll try to post it today!


Thank you all;p

Missy said...

i like the way u write. so attractive ;p enzain miskeeena reem al7een shno bee9er feeha!

Bombay Bombshell said...

missy: Thankyou ;p and ah.. you have to wait to find out ;p

Oranjina fadidra said...

more please bas i want happy ending :p

Houliee said...

He's DEAD ?? :|
But the story just started :O
Laaa2;p I liked himm!!
whats going to happen in part 3?;p
Will reem die Too?

Anonymous said...

today is 3 more days gone!!!

zahrat ilma6ba5 said...

marra y7ammis!
yalla update lwsm7ty :D

Someday said...

what?!?!?! and that's real!?!?!?
Next part!! please!

Silver said...

WOW! Amazing story! yalla nabe next part bsr3a!!:P

Anonymous said...

*waiting!!*

Anonymous said...

3ajeebaa!!! garait part1, part2 ma3a ba3ath.. 3yoni gamat tdammi3 min il-alwan LOL

yallah abi part3 gabil ma anam lol

thanks :*

Anonymous said...

I actually feel enraged.

Maya // مايا said...

NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! But but but but I have a crush on Abdullah! :(((((

Mashallahhh you're a gifted writer ya 7abeebty :P Keep em coming pls!

Anonymous said...

For real??! Like, in reality he dies?

I teared up:(